alone

and suddenly I realized...
the entire time
you were here
I
was
alone

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  1. Martin ShoneOctober 05, 2011 11:59 AM

    This is so sad, Trisha. So sad, it hurts.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 03, 2011 5:42 AM

    Ouch. This hurts.

    And I like the way you isolated 'I' because it really emphasized the loneliness.

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